The Script

here is a script we have put together for our thriller opening;

Panorama view of forest
2 Undercover Police walking (Eddie and Terry)

Eddie: Sources say its just up ahead

Terry: There could be a big bonus in this for us...

Different shot of two odd looking people (Damon and Rico) taking pills in the forest, tilting, jump shots
Back to Eddie and Terry

Terry: How much further?

Eddie: Just up ahead

Short shot of odd people, followed by shot of major drug smuggler (Randy). Then a shot of Terry, looking surprised to see him on his own.

Randy: (slight laugh) So...you finally came

Terry suspects something but before he can turn his head, Eddie has stabbed him in the back with a knife. Shot of Randy grinning widely. As Terry slumps to the floor, Eddies face is shown to have a sinister smirk on his face. There is then a shot of Eddie and randy looking at each other from a side angle. Then a quick shot the two odd people running again, on the effect of drugs. they stop however when they come near to the clearing where Eddie, Randy, and the body of terry are. Hallucinating, they stop. then back to the shot of Eddie and randy, they approach each other and give each other a hand on arm handshake.

Eddie: I take it you have my payment?

Randy: How could i forget?

The pair grin. Randy goes towards a bag he has near him, and as he picks it up, he speaks

Randy: All about the money (smiles)

Eddie: Is there any other way? (also smiles)

Damon and rico start to have a panic attack, and give themselves away.

Randy: what was that?

Eddie pulls out gun,randy does the same, and his head movement gestures randy to follow. Damon and Rico, still under the effects of drugs, run off into the forest followed by Eddie and Randy. Damon however is caught by Randy as randy shoots him in the shoulder, who consults eddie as to what to do with him. As damon rolls over, Eddie steps up and there is a camera shot of the barrel of the gun looking damon in the eye. Eddie pulls the trigger. there is then a dark screen, with the sound effect of a mans scream, and the title of the film appears.